Fallacies

Oversimplification: The death penalty should be given as a sentence for all who commit a violent crime.
This statement fits in this category because the death penalty might be of question to some citizens. Although the death penalty is not likely to stop a criminal, perhaps it will at least make others think before they commit a crime.


Post hoc: The country went down the tubes after the election of President Obama.
The country was on a downward spiral even before Obama was elected, although, lots of people believe that he is the cause. Nobody could do a better job. Every President deals with the issues at hand when they are in office, no matter what the situation is. President Obama is handling the current healthcare issue, for example, in the best manner that he thinks is fit.


Rationalization: If I was not experiencing issues with the internet, I could have completed my assignment on time.
This statement shows rationalization because I am making excuses for not getting an assignment done. I may have had two weeks to finish, but I waited until last minute to complete it.

Topic

Nashville, TN is a great place to live. I have recently visited, and I am convinced now that it is awesome. There are numerous musical and bar experiences to discover...little "hole in the wall" places that have a wonderful atmosphere, whether you are a country music fan or just like to "hang out". Nashville has so many places and dives to visit. It is impossible to pick a favorite place. So much is going on all the time. Not to mention, the Titans football stadium is located just a few blocks from the "fun". Anyone who likes the Titans would love to be that close. The hospitality of everyone there is unmatched.

Argument

Recently, I was in a situation that was not looking good for me. It happened at work. A coworker and I sort of got into an argument about call. She was playing the "seniority card" on me, and unfortunately, she got her way. In my opinion, she always got her way, and it didn't matter who it upset or what the argument was. I do look back and wish I would have said some different things, but I know it would not have mattered.

Persuasive Essay

The hardest part for me is deciding on a topic. I still am unsure what to write about. If a more specific topic was given to me, and then I was told to write a paper to persuade a person one way or the other, I would do much better.

After a topic is selected, I will do pretty good at writing an essay. Until then, I am stumped.

Personal Narrative 3

This was a fun passage. I enjoyed reading it. The intro was nothing spectacular, and at first I was not really interested; however, as I continued to read the next several paragraphs, it began to hold my attention. I like the humor that was presented.

Personal Narrative 2

I think the author did a good job for the most part. I wasn't too entrigued by the introduction, but the rest of the essay kept my attention. I like how the author recalls his boyhood as if he is reliving it through his son's experiences. The events and sensory details allow the reader to become enveloped in the scene with the author.

Personal Narrative

I enjoyed this narrative. I think the author did a great job at grabbing and keeping my attention. There were several words that I didn't understand (French), but I understand his theory behind it to make the reader feel like they are there. All of the details were significant, and I feel like the author showed his character.